On the shoot me and luke discussed maybe removing the last section of the sequence which involved a conversation, leading to a struggle between the murderer and his female victim. We felt that we should focus more on the murderer preparing for his kill because we would have too much to fit into two minutes and still make sense. We then desided to think about a possible way to get around this problem without changing our idea again.
A possible way to get around this problem is to cut out the conversation between the killer and the victim and to just show him knocking at the door and maybe when she answers the door, he says her name and she replies with 'yes?' then he knocks her over and cuts to black with a scream played over the top.
I think this would be an effective way to get around this problem and it would also stop the scene from getting boring becuase there will be a sudden change of pace. If we left the conversation in, the majority of the two minutes will be very slow and the viewer might lose interest.
James
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